There was a lot of unrealized potential in this story, to the point, I wanted to write the next draft myself. But I already waste too much time writing stuff that will never see the light of day! I suppose everything is an exercise. Anyway, I hope one day the author finishes this story and republishes.
However, the science in it all seemed plausible and well-researched, unlike my first Steampunk story review.
Wes and Kit by Hollis Shiloh
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
I really wanted to like this more than I did.
It really felt like I was reading the first draft, with corrected spelling. It had a very unfinished feeling to it that had nothing to do with the plot, per se, or the characters, per se...it all just felt very...unpolished.
I would very much like to read a polished, final draft of this story.
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